英语作文技巧

一、 背诵：首先认真研究历年四级写作真题，分析近年来四级写作的出题规律和考试重点，从语言、结构、 内容三大层面，认真研读经典写作真题范文：语言方面学习范文中的精彩词汇、词组、句型；结构方面学习范文的框架结构、内在逻辑、关联词、同义替换和代词替换；内容方面学习范文的论点、论据和论证。同时背诵精彩写作范文，要求滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善，扎扎实实提高自己的写作实力。

二、默写：背诵熟练之后默写下来，仔细对照原文，会发现你默写的文章与原文有一些语法、拼写、标点的区别，这些区别就是你的写作弱点，学习关键在于针锋突破，不要全面出击。这些弱点正是你在考试中扣分的原因所在，把这些弱点意义克服，分数自然就会提高。

三、 中译英：首先将写作真题范文译为中文，或参考范文的正确译文，然后进行中译英的工作，根据自己的理解把中文译为英文，最后对照英文原文，你会发现你的译文与原文存在较大的差别，这些差别正是你写作低分的症结所在。同样的一个中文句子，仔细对比一下你使用了哪些词汇、词组和句型，原文使用了哪些，这样你的写作水平才会逐渐提高。

四、 写作：进行完上述工作之后，在考前必须进行写作的工作，只有动笔写作，才会发现自己的问题。可以写5—10篇真题或模拟题，模仿自己曾经背诵过的精彩词汇、词组、句型、框架和范文，写出一篇新的文章。最初不要求速度，但考前一定要进行模考，半小时写出一篇120－150词的文章。写完之后仔细修改其中的语言错误，将其改的更加精彩。

英语写作基础不太好的四级考生，必须按照上述步骤严格进行；基础较好的考生学习顺序正好相反，首先写作，直接写作英语四级真题；其次中译英，在研读原文之前，进行中译英的工作，译完对比，找出差距；然后背诵；最后默写。同时可以准备自己的写作框架，应用文和论说文分别形成固定的写法，积累精彩句型。

在考试中，考生对作文的思维应该是：1、审题;2、思考简单的分支观点;考虑可以采用的成熟的句型或“万能句”。其中，前两步比较关键。

一、对于审题，应该看到，近年四级或六级题目大多是给出提纲，那么可以直接把提纲变为中心句，这些中心句就是每段的开头句。后面接入标志逻辑的词汇，如 first.。。;second.。。;third.。。;等分支观点。也就是说，审题就是考虑文章的合理结构是什么，中心句是什么。

二、置于思考分支观点，请一定记住，外语考试的作文，考查的目标不是考生的思维水平或逻辑分析能力，而是考核语言表达能力。所以建议采取的措施是，简化自己的思维和分析。也就是，如何降低自己的思维水平，来迎合自己有限的语言状况。比如：这个东西不贵，it is inexpensive，当然也可以说：it is cheap，或者说，it does not cost me much money。等这些相关但简单的表达也是合理的。

最后，作文是应用类考试。所以光看不写是不行的。培根说过，“writing makes an exact man.”只有多写才能活化思想，固定句型和找到适合自己的“万能句”。

无论怎么出题，外语考试的作文大可以分为：1、正反论证;2、原因现象描述类;3、图表;4、名言谚语所谓的写信，无非就是在这四类的

基础上，套用信件的格式而已。另外，大致讲来，英文考试的结构大多可以套用：中心句+1、2、3的模式。中心句即每段第一句，中心句可由所给题纲变来，1、2、3 就是每段里的分支观点或分述。

英语四六级考试如何改写范文

英语四级、英语六级写作提高方法：

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist? 1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3. 我认为…来源：考试大考试大成就你的梦想 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

Nowadays， many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city， the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province。 So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand， some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand， some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion， the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere。

In my opinion， the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus， it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field。 首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。 第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays， … … have become one of the popular … …。 It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … …。 第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand， some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …。 On the other hand， some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion， … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … …。 第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion， … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …， it will ruin … …。 其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity)：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太

具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。 连贯性(coherence)：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays， on one hand， on the other hand， in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

完整性(completeness)：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …。 On the other hand， … …。”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。 1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型：It is known to us that … … It is said that … … It is reported that … … It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。 3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house。 4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since， for， as，如：

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill。

此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

Since the boy was ill， he was absent. 句式多样化。

英语四级作文模板和常用句型

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。 As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes. 然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。（Hold different attitudes 持不同的看；Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法）

As society develops, people are attaching much importance to.... 随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............

People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting

求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。

As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.

关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.

在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....

最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。 The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.

人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。

...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?\"

_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是：\"我们该如何

Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges, 现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。

英语四级作文万能句 （一）段首句

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.

2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. It\"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.

3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.

4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。 Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.

5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，…… People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.

8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar

graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why? （二）中间段落句

1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。 On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.

2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。 But I don\"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our country\"s development and construction. First，______.What\"s more, _____.Most important of all,______. 4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。 There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______

5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，

Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.

7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.

8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______. 9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous. 10. 完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______. （三）结尾句

1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.

2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……

But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.

4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.

5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it\"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____. 7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.

8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______. 9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

英语四级作文万能模板汇总

提纲式作文 1． 对立观点式

A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？ B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？ C．我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。 2． 批驳观点式 A．一个错误观点。 B． 我不同意。

Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。

There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。 3． 社会问题（现象）式 A．一个社会问题或者现象。 B． 产生的原因

C．对社会和我们生活的影响 D． 如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话） E． 前景的预测。

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。

There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。

X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated（表达） in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..

微博的出现

1、近年来\"微博\"越来越流行，许多人利用\"博客\"来表达心声、交流想法 2、微博流行的原因

3、目前的微博中可能存在的问题 流行的原因

只是为了好玩，随大流

Many people use microblog just for fun or follow the general trend. 省时便利

Microblog enables people to convey their emotions and individual thoughts more conveniently. 微博的危害

万能理由：浪费时间，影响学习

Being addicted to microblog is nothing but a waste of time 容易受到别人的思想的影响，失去思考的能力

Being susceptible to others’ idea easily，most people tend to lose the ability of thinking independenttly. 出国留学的好处

1. 出国留学有很多好处 2. 出国留学也会遇到很多难题 3. 你的选择 出国留学的好处：

接触到全新的想法和趋势，增加知识，拓宽视野

Being exposed to entirely new ideas and trends，they can enrich their knowledge and expand their horizons.

在国外生活，更快地掌握外遇

by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home. 减少对父母的依靠

A great gift a parent can give is to let a child spread his /her wings and be independent

Reduce their dependence on their parents 出国留学遇到的困难： 语言难，沟通难

learning a foreign language and communicating smoothly with the local people is far from an easy thing at the outset for most people. 适应当地饮食，习俗，思想和气候

It also takes time for students to adapt themselves to a new diet， custom，set of ideas and even the climate

竞选学生会干部

1、很多大学生都热衷于参加\"校园政治\"活动，比如竞选学生会或社团干部 2、这样做有哪些好处 3、可能带来的问题 好处：（也就是竞选班干部的原因）

提高学生实践能力，尤其是管理和协调能力

students can enhance their practical capabilities, especially management and coordination capacity. 提高学生的责任感

campus political activities help strengthen students’ sense of responsibility. 提供一个展示的舞台，充分发挥他们的能力

these activities provide a stage for students to display themselves and bring their 带来的坏处和危害

占用太多时间，会影响学习

Too much participation in campus politics might interfere with students’ studies because these activities will take up a lot of time and energy. 图名利，影响心理健康

some students’ being keen on campus politics is for fame and gain, which will influence their health of mentality 最后的建议

schools and teachers should give necessary instruction to students on their participation into campus politics.

大学生兼职赚钱

1、有的大学生在入学后寻找各种途径去兼职赚钱 2、人们对此看法不一 3、你的观点 支持观点：

一个和专业相关的兼职可以使学生将理论运用到时间中去

A major-related part-time job enables students to better apply theory to practice 可以学到很多书本上需不到的经验

They can learn a wealth of experience which they can never learn from textbooks. 赚钱可以减轻家庭经济负担

By making some money, students can to some extent alleviate the financial burden on their families.

接触社会，帮他们更好地在未来适应社会

social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people , which enables them to better adapt to the competitive society in the future.

反对的观点：

占用很多时间和精力，会影响学习

It will interfere with the students’ study for the reason that part-time job will take up a lot of time and energy.

容易受到同龄人和不良社会影响

旅游业的发展

1、 随着人们生活水平的提高，旅游业兴旺起来 2、 旅游业的兴旺也使自然环境遭到了破坏 3、 如何防止对自然环境的破坏 随着旅游的发展环境破坏的原因： 游客缺乏环境保护意识

Little attention has been paid to the negative impact of the tourists’ behavior on the environment. 开发过度

In order to gain more profits，people have overexploited the natural environment and then break the ecological balance .

范文

1. 主题：电影和电视对公众的影响力 【题目】

How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

【范文】 The Influence of Television and Movies

There is no doubt that watching television and movies can influence the way that people behave. Moreover， it seems that people are spending more and more time watching some sort of visual entertainment， whether it is television， a video tape or a DVD. Therefore， the effects of visual media cannot be ignored.

One obvious effect of these media is that watching them induces people to buy certain products. Television advertising is widespread and， nowadays， even movie theaters permit advertisements. Another way TV and the movies affect people is that they give people either a broader view of the world or a distorted one， depending on what type of program they watch. Those who watch news and educational program can learn many new things while those who watch primarily entertainment shows may come to believe that most people in the world possess great wealth and good looks. It may make them become dissatisfied with their own lives. Finally， perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children， who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see on TV or in the movies.

With the ever-increasing popularity of video entertainment， society must pay attention to these effects. Television and movies， while entertaining and informative， cannot take the place of real experience. 2.

生活充满了考验和不可预知性。有些人在困难面前一蹶不振，怨天尤人，而有些人却能走出困境走向成功。我们究竟该怎样面对生活，该怎样把握自己？

Create Your Own Life

Sometimes things happen to you that may seem horrible, painful, and unfair at first, but upon reflection you find that without overcoming those obstacles you never would have realized your potential, strength, willpower, or heart.①

Illness, injury, lost moments of true greatness, and sheer stupidity all occur to test the limits of your soul. Without these small tests, whatever they may be, life would be like a smoothly paved road to nowhere. It would be safe and comfortable, but dull and utterly pointless.

If someone hurts you, betrays you, or breaks your heart, forgive them, for they have helped you learn about trust and the importance of being cautious to whom you open your heart.②

Make every day count.③ Appreciate every moment and take from

those moments everything that you possibly can for you may never be able to experience it again.

Talk to people that you have never talked to before, and listen to what they have to say. You can make anything you wish of your life.

Create your own life and then go out and live it with absolutely no regrets.

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3. 1）网络课堂教学的兴起，使传统的课堂教学受到了前所未有的挑战

2）网络课堂教学模式会完全取代传统课堂教学模式吗？ 3）你的看法，理由是…… 【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一个有争议的观点，提纲第3点要 求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比 选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述网络课堂对传统课堂的挑战；提出关于网络课堂是否会取代传 统课堂的两种不同观点并说明理由；表明“我”的态度并说明理由。

Will Network Classrooms Replace Traditional Classrooms?

With the popularization of the Internet, network classrooms are gaining more and more popularity. As a new teaching pattern, network classrooms have become an effective complement to traditional classrooms. So some people propose one question: will network classrooms replace traditional classrooms?

As to this question, the opinions vary from one to another. Some people think it quite possible for network classrooms to take the place of traditional classrooms. First, network classrooms needn’t have face-to-face communication and are not limited by time and place, which facilitate both teachers and students. Secondly, network classrooms release teachers from repeating the same contents since the video or audio material can be played time and again. However, many people have opposite standpoints. They say that with online courses, students lack direct communications with teachers and their confusion cannot be solved instantly. In addition, the computer system cannot be guaranteed to work stably all the time.

Personally, both network classrooms and traditional classrooms are necessary for students. If traditional teaching patterns and the modern ones like network classrooms can be combined together, more fruitful education is sure to be realized.

4. The Media and Famous People

In almost every form of media, including television, newspapers and magazines, a great deal of attention is paid to the personal lives of celebrities. It seems that the public cannot get enough of this kind of news.

However, I believe that the media have a responsibility to present a balanced view of the world, as well as respect the lives of public figures. Therefore, I believe that the media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people.

For people who are fascinated with the lives of public figures there are some forms of media devoted exclusively to this topic. They can satisfy their curiosityby buying fan magazines and watching TV shows devoted to entertainment news. The general media should present all types of information because people have different interests. Furthermore, the practice of dwelling on the private lives of celebrities can lead people to pay more attention to these matters than they otherwise would. Perhaps most importantly, the media should respect the privacy of every individual, including public figures. They may have chosen to be in the public eye, but that does not give the public the right to know everything about them. Moreover, many stories about celebrities are untrue; they are only gossip reported to increase sales of magazines and other media. They are unfair to the famous and mislead the public.

For all of these reasons, I believe that the media should pay more attention to matters other than the private lives of public figures. In this way, they can appeal to a wider audience and encourage people to develop other interests. In my opinion, the media currently pay too much attention to the private lives of public figures.

六级作文练兵：城市交通问题

１．在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重 ２．城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响 ３．解决的方法与措施

题材连接：城市交通问题属于比较热点的社会话题，对于六级考试的作文题材来说，越来越偏重于社会的次热点话题，而且与人们的生活密切相关，让考生拿到题目后有话可说，有文可写．对于目前的社会问题来说了，除了交通问题外，住房问题，就业的问题都可能作为考查的范围与话题 参考范文:

There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worryfor the residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularlychoked with traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacitycontributes largely to the vexing problem. How to solve the headache?.

The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bussystems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads cansolve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds thechronic annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy relianceon cars and drive a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap andgood way. We can create a system of customized bus routes and

highlightthe development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effectivecombination of these solutions will enable the urban areas to possess asmooth traffic.

六级作文练兵：网络和谐问题

1．随着社会和经济发展，网络成为了每个人必不可少的获取信息的工具

2．但是，在网络上也出现了一些不和谐的因素，如垃圾信息，黄色网站，虚假新闻，网络炒作等。

3．如何采取措施制止和消除这些现象。

题材连接：在当今的社会中，＂和谐＂这个词汇出现的频率可以说是非常高了，对于六级作文的话题选择基本上是社会次热点话题以及部分校园话题，除了注意网络和谐这个话题外，还有特别注意邻里之间和谐相处，社会的和谐，人与环境的和谐（制止污染问题），校园寝室中与室友的和谐相处等等热点话题，都有可能进入命题老师的视线．．

参考范文:

The advent of the Internet ushered in a new era of interpersonalcommunications and business operations. Undoubtedly, the Net arerevolutionizing the daily lives of the people who have an access to it.The primary reason behind the Internet boom roots in its multifunction.It provides a vehicle for netizens to shop, search, publish blogs andbrowse WebPages.

A range of problems lurking behind the frenzy of Internetimpressively stand out. A vast majority of Internet users' mail boxesare saturated with junk mails, an issue which sparks strong criticismand generates the loss of corporate productivity. It's not alone. Pornwebsites lure a growing number of young people's visits. False news viathe e-mail, BBS and chat room increasingly poses a threat to the socialprosperity and stability.

To crack down them, we should push for a more effectively toughlaw. We should join our forces to launch a nation-wide campaign,including imposing stiff penalties on spammers, shutting down orblocking the lewd sites and introducing a real-name registration systemto curb fraudulent messages. We can fully believe that our combinedefforts will reap rewards. A clean cyberspace will paint our lives morecolorfully. An economically booming and technologically advanced globalweb will play a vital role in the national economic and culturaladvancement.

Li Ming

六级作文练兵：信息安全问题 １．信息安全问题

1．信息安全问题日益重要。

2．信息安全事故可能导致的危害。 3．如何做到信息安全。

题材连接：安全这个词汇在社会中也经常被提起，除了注意信息安全，网络安全外，还应该注意公共场所的安全等等．

When a variety of problems plague the information systems, thecritical importance of information security becomes the focus ofpeople's concern. It does deserve the unprecedented emphasis. It iswidely accepted that information security, to some extent, outweighsother spheres in the field of information. So the related authorities,enterprises, institutions and organizations place the high priority onit.

Information Security concerns a range of problems-information interception, loss, damage etc. Business and militaryinformation leakage will have an devastating impact. For theinformation owners and monitors, they must drive their efforts toenhance the security protection and maintenance. For example, a strictcontrol over the access to the secret data shouldn't be absent. Thenetwork and software provider should take a set of tailored protectionmeasures targeting different computer crimes. The security issuesshould be also considered at the legislative level, so we are clamoringfor a law designed to clamp down on various cyber crimes.