小作文动态图表课件

动态图表的写法技巧、词汇句型和得分点

屠鸭联盟：老徐雅思

 数据图表题 线图line chart

柱图column / bar chart 饼图pie chart 表格table

 非数据图表题 流程图flow chart 地图map

图表作文评分标准（Analytical Scoring）

 任务完成情况（内容）Task Achievement（TA）

 衔接与连贯（结构）Coherence and Cohesion（CC）  词汇资源（词汇） Lexical Resource（LR）

 语法多样性和准确性(语法) Grammatical Range and Accuracy（GRA）

剑7-2线图: The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (剑7-2）

词汇与句型：

The consumption of chicken increased significantly to 250g in 2004. Increased to 250g = increased by 110g Increased = rose = grew = went up

Decreased = declined = dropped = fell = went down

幅度副词：significantly / considerably / dramatically / rapidly /sharply Slightly / gradually / slowly

功能句型（升降变化）

1. The consumption of chicken showed / experienced an increase / a rising trend / an upward trend during this period, reaching 250g in 2004.

2. There was a dramatic increase in the amount of chicken and it rose to 250g in 2004.

3. The 25-year period saw / witnessed an increase/ a rise of 110g in the consumption of chicken.

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功能句型（平稳&波动）

(1) The amount of water used for agriculture remained/stayed stable/steady/unchanged for 5 years.

(2) The unemployment rate leveled out / leveled off at 6% between 2000 and 2005.

(3) The house price stabilized at a high level from 1998 to 2000. (4) The consumption of electricity fluctuated slightly in this period. 功能句型（极值&超越）

(1) The proportion of migrant workers reached a record high of 60% / a peak of 60% / the highest point (60%) in 2005. (2) The birth rate peaked at 3% in 2005.

(3) The rainfall in 2000 was 1500 mm, a new high / the highest point in the twenty years.

(4) The percentage of female smokers grew to a record high of 37% in 1990 and overtook / exceeded that of male smokers.

剑7-2线图： 开头段

The graph compares the amounts of fish and some different kinds of meat consumed in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph shows how much fish and some different kinds of meat were consumed in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph compares the consumption of fish, beef, lamb and chicken in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 改写技巧： （1）同义替换 （2）词性改变

（3）名词变成名词性从句 （4）引入图表中信息

正文部分 老徐版本范文

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In 1979, the consumption of beef was the largest of these foods, at about 225 grams per person per week. The consumption of lamb and chicken was almost the same (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).

From 1979 to 2004, the quantities of beef and lamb fell significantly to

about100 grams and 55 grams respectively. There was a slight decrease in the amount of fish and fish remained the least popular food (around 40 grams).By contrast, the consumption of chicken showed an upward trend,

overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 19. By 2004 it had risen to almost 250 grams per person per week and chicken had become the most popular food.

考官版本

In 1979, beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).

However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The

consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable. The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 19. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.

结论段：

Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.

剑7-2写作技巧归纳

1. 确定每个项目（每条线）的对象词 2. 通过变换主语来变换句型 3. 动词的分词形式 4. 代词的使用 5. 数据如何给出 6. 副词作为插入语

7. 上升下降的幅度的对比

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第二种写法（主体段)

In 1979, the consumption of beef was the largest of these foods, at about 225 grams per person per week. It had decreased dramatically to 100 grams by 2004. By contrast, the amount of chicken was 140 grams per person per week in 1979. It showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 19. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.

The amount of lamb was similar to that of chicken in 1979 (around 150 grams). It declined rapidly to 55 grams in 2004. There was a slight decrease in the amount of fish. Fish remained the least popular food, but its consumption levels were the most stable (around 50 grams).

剑8-4线图：The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. （剑8-4）

开头段写法：

The graph compares the transport of goods by different modes in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

The graph shows how many goods were transported by different modes in the UK from 1974 to 2002. 中间段写法：

The quantity of goods transported by road was the highest over the 28-year period, rising from 70 to 98 million tonnes. In comparison, the quantity of goods transported by water was the lowest. It grew from 5 to 22 million tonnes from 1974 to 1995, after which it remained unchanged till 2002. Water and rail transported the same amount of goods in the first 4 years, at 40 million tonnes. The quantity of water transport showed a significant growth between 1978 and 1982, rising to almost 60 million tonnes. For the following decade, it stayed stable and after a slight fall in 1998, it increased to 62 million tonnes in 2002. The quantity of goods transported by rail fluctuated between 30 and 40 million tonnes from 1978 to 2002, ending at 40 million tonnes. 结尾段写法：

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Over this span of 28 years, the quantities of goods transported by road, water and pipeline all increased, while the quantity transported by rail did not change.

时间表达 In … Till … By…

From … to …； between … and … In the 20-year period；in the two decades

In the first 5 years; Over the next 5 years; For the following 5 years …, from which (after which)…… Thereafter, ……

将来时态

…is expected to increase … …is projected to increase …

It is predicted that … will increase …

剑9-2柱图：The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. （剑9-2） 目标对象词：

Local fixed line calls ……

The amount of time people spent on local fixed line …… The minutes spent on national and international calls …… 此题在书上有详细的考官参考范文，非常简单好懂

剑7-4饼图： The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (剑7-4）

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句型转换

煤所发的电占总量的50%。

The percentage (proportion) of electricity produced by coal was 50%. Coal accounted for (made up, constituted) 50% of fuel source for electricity production.

Coal produced (generated, contributed) 50% of electricity. 正文段参考范文

澳大利亚(第一种写法）

The electricity production in Australia went up from 100 units to 170 units from 1980 to 2000. In 1980, coal accounted for half of energy source for electricity production (50 units). The percentage of natural gas and hydro power was the same (20%) and oil contributed 10 units of electricity. In 2000, the percentage of electricity generated by coal rose to 75% (130 units). The proportion of hydro power remained almost unchanged, at 20%. Oil and natural gas were not important any more. 澳大利亚(第二种写法）

The electricity production in Australia went up from 100 units to 170 units from 1980 to 2000. In 1980, coal accounted for half of energy source for electricity production (50 units) and its percentage rose to 75% (130 units) in the two decades. Natural gas and oil generated 20 and 10 units of electricity

respectively in 1980 and the two fuels were not important any more in 2000. The amount of electricity produced by hydro power was 20 units in 1980. This figure increased to 36, but the percentage of hydro power remained almost unchanged (20%). 法国

The total production of electricity in France doubled from 90 units to 180 units between 1980 and 2000. Nuclear power, which was not used in Australia at all, produced 15 units of electricity in 1980. Twenty years later, it became the most significant fuel and contributed 126 units(70%). The amounts of electricity produced by coal and oil showed little change in the twenty years(25 units). However, natural gas and hydro power generated 25 and 5 units respectively in 1980 and they made up a tiny proportion in the electricity production in 2000.

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表格题

The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (In millions). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (2015-3-12 雅思考题）

写作提示：

1. 把表格当成6条线来描述，这样会比较清晰，不容易混乱。 2. Total总人数可以先写。刚开始快速上升，后来增长变慢。 3. 然后写欧洲（因为欧洲人数最多）。前五年增长很快，后来增长变慢。

4. 美洲和亚太地区可以分为一段。美洲的特点是上升到最高值，然后下降。亚太地区是稳步上升。

5. 非洲和中东趋势相同，都是不断上升。

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老徐版本参考范文：

The table shows how many people travelled abroad in different areas in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.

From 1990 to 1995, the total number of travelers increased dramatically from 448.9 million to 615.2 million. In the next decade, this number grew more slowly and reached 693.7 million in 2005. The number of travelers in Europe was much higher than that in other areas. It rose significantly from 280.2 to 390.3 million in the first 5 years and then slowly to 400.2 million in 2005.

The number of travelers in America was 80.5 million in 1990. After peaking at 118.2 million in 2000, it declined to 113.2 million in 2005. The figure for Asia and the pacific region increased steadily from about 60 million in 1990 to 135.8 million in 2005. Africa and Middle East had 18.2 and 9.8 million travellers in 1990. The two areas showed almost the same trend, rising to 28.7 and 15.8 million in 2005 respectively.

Overall, during the period from 1990 to 2005, the number of international travelers in the five areas showed an upward trend.

本次课总结：

线图、柱图、饼图、表格

动态图：项目自己的变化趋势 项目之间对比

1. 写项目自己的变化趋势要找准对象词

2. 写项目之间对比可以多变换句型（变换主语）

3. 理清楚小作文的顺序和结构（按时间的顺序vs.按项目的顺序） 4. 如何读数字（at， 打括号，直接描述，介词+名词+分词） 5. 如何描述线图的连续变化

6. 如何描述项目变化的幅度，项目之间的幅度可以对比 7. 项目很多的时候如何进行合并 8. 不重要的信息需要合并或者舍弃

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